Score: 6

"Well that was.."

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 15, 2009

Well that was disappointing.. In my opinion waterlollies was the best one...
Your animation has become worse.. that was no way near a good as the rest..
Not only are you not trying as hard with the animation.. but also with the story line.. For some reason.. you have made this a "to be continued" when it wasn't even that long.. Your other work is much longer.. and they weren't to be continued.. But this maybe down to the file size..
I thought the narrator at the beginning was pretty cool.. although at times.. well mostly at the beginning she was drowned out by the music..
For the story itself.. it seemed as if you were running out of ideas.. and decided to put in a narrator.. Its like.. Your other work didn't have a narrator but it was still good.. This.. if it didn't have a narrator.. it would be much worse..
And since its a to be continued.. I suggest you carry on using the narrator..
But take away the narrator when you decide to make another one without a "To be continued" as the narrators aren't really doing you any good...
Basically.. the storyline, animation and length of video use to be much better than it is now.. Perhaps you don't really care about that since you may be getting paid and still get paid no matter how much you don't try..
But if you aren't getting paid.. it seems as though your not trying as hard as you use to.. perhaps your love for flash has deteriorated and you can't be arsed to spend time animating decently..

Ofcourse the animation was good.. but when you look back at your old work.. which I suggest you do.. you really notice the different..
Perhaps look back at your old work without any sound and compare it to your new work with sound.. this may help you make a better flash next time you come to make a video about bitey again..
Because seriously.. they're getting worse..

Anywho.. carry on animating.. which I'm sure you will

This Five is not entirely for the flash but more to do with how much potential you have.. and how you did not use it to the best of your ability.. which you have done previously.

Score: 5

"Meh"

submission: Pinball Maze

date: November 29, 2009

Wasn't hard at all.. I don't know what everyone is complaining about..
I didn't die once.. I got 1880.053 on my first go
Fuck knows if that is good or not..

Ermm.. Just make it longer.. I have a slight suspicion you stole this from a website like flashkit or something.. and then changed it about a bit.. and claimed it as your own..
But thats not why I've given the "low" score..
The low score is due to you not having enough levels.. and there being no music..

Score: 6

"I hardly make review but..."

submission: Pencilmation #10

date: November 8, 2009

Wow.. thats not your best work
Ofcourse I would have given a higher score.. like a nine
But knowing your work.. I really expected more from you..
Its better than Pencilmation #9 I have to admit
But seriously.. you seem to be losing your touch..

The simple ones are much better.. they're more random and entertaining
You never know what is going to happen

This was really just predictable..

Also.. You seem to have taken away the hand.. I thought it was a new feature.. Are you just getting lazier?
You now use the page turner to travel forward in time.. Don't do that..

The whole point of this originally.. was the fact that you were drawing something on the page and it would come alive..

This one is just like your creating a normal story.. and then adding a pencil init.. as an excuse so you can name it Pencilmation hence adding more to the series...

Score: 6

"Didn't do it for me.."

submission: Sean and Justin

date: September 18, 2009

As you as you started making him go crazy with the ring on.. I started to dislike it..
They joke was predictable.. that his friend would just "slap" him out of it..
The whole of the flash was random.. I disliked it
Sure.. randomness is funny.. like the Awesome Series..
But this.. :/ It just got really boring
None of the jokes made me laugh
I can understand why this got such a good score.. and why you got Daily Feature.. but this to me truly wasn't funny..
Its almost as if you made all these random jokes.. unsure whether people would find it funny.. and its just fortunate for you that people have..

Score: 10

"My first review in ages.. Don't you feel lucky"

submission: Canabalt

date: September 9, 2009

Simple yet fucking brilliant
My score: 1.5k
You also didn't mention that you can jump with the space bar :D

Score: 0

"Well That was"

submission: Elmaz & Glass

date: August 6, 2009

I thought it was gonna be good.. the first frame.. with the play button.. made it look so good.. but then when I played it.. there was a lack of skill
You basically got someone elses music.. and just animated it really simply..
Not my style
The music made me feel sick..

Score: 2

"Well that was.."

submission: SRM Transformers 4 Part 1

date: July 18, 2009

I personally would have closed it if it wasn't for my brother sitting right next to me
The jokes didn't make me laugh at all
I loved the transformers cartoons and movie
But this.. this I just hated
Obviously you did well to get daily second and front page..
This wasn't for me
I personally don't understand why everyone seems to like this so much.. I guess it's because I have a completely different view to them

The animation was alright.. the only part I did find intriguing.. was when they turned into jets and flew off..

Keep up the good work! And I do mean it.. its not sarcasm.. Just because I failed to like it.. doesn't mean it wasn't good

Score: 9

"Considering the time..."

submission: Newgrounds

date: December 26, 2008

Considering the time it was submitted... with the old flash... that is pretty good

Well done

Score: 10

"Mwhahahahahaha"

submission: MGS 3: Crab Battle

date: November 29, 2008

That was jokes!
I dont know why you stopped making flash movies

These were brilliant.

Out of all the front page things, this was the best metal gear solid thing!
WOW
Well done

Score: 10

"zomfg that was hal-laar-riiiii-ouuus"

submission: Suicidal Advert (Maybe)

date: November 28, 2008

The animation was as fab as the fab aura

The ending was jokes, and captured orange perfectly
and the guy pissing was brilliant

Keep up the good work, make more!!!