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Like Duddeeee, that was funny

FRUNTPORCH responds:

haha! thanks

omg 3D movie maker, what version of windows are you running this on?

wermusam responds:

Hi Aprime, I've used 3D Movie Maker on Windows 95, 98, ME, XP, and Windows 7. I used Camtasia Studios to screen capture the video from 3D Movie Maker to a video format where it can be uploaded online or converted into a DVD. I don't know about newer versions of Windows but I noticed frames would run a little faster with newer versions of Windows and could handle more content in a scene without the frame rate slowing down.

They should use this animation in schools as an intro for swimming lessons :)
The animation was awesome, great job!
Not sure why at 3:00 you decided to draw black lines to end the body, when you already had lines from the item in front. Quite distracting and odd considering you didn't do it at 2:33
Just petty stuff from me really, again - great job!

AgentDajo responds:

I had to draw the lines in, because the dock was not on it's own separate layer. in order to compensate, I had to draw black lines to easily paint-bucket color their bodies.

It's good. Some nice little jokes here and there.

My only suggestion is that right now it seems a part like part 7 instead of episode 7.
The difference being, this feels like a movie split into several parts, instead of an episode you might find in a series.
Don't change it, it's good they all link together. But maybe allow the script to imply what as happened before. Not so much in a sense that it's annoying for those who had watched the previous episodes.

Not the easiest things to do, but just something to bear in mind and you'll do it better each time :P

calmulligan responds:

Thanks heaps for the critique! I appreciate the time you took to give me your thoughts and criticism, and will certainly take this all into account as the series develops.
I can promise you, as I'm now working on episode 17, episodes 11 through to 20 are almost an entirely different show; better executed and has more of an identity and quality to it. I hope you continue watching as it evolves :)

That's some of the nicest tween animation I've seen.
My only advice is to animate according to the sound effect than add a sound effect to the animation. But hey, perhaps that's what you done.
Regardless, again - nice animation. Interesting to watch.

ponderous-plants responds:

Thanks for the advice, trying to getting sounds to match up was pretty tough.

Nice video. How long did it take to animate?

hummerh14 responds:

Thanks took about 5 months given all the procrastination to not work on it.

Wiggidy

Aviator123 responds:

Wiggidy

Pretty sure that Owl sound effect is from Zelda... maybe not, maybe it's just an Owl. Either way, cool first animation and story. Nice job! Keep it up!

DannyCasale responds:

Eh just an owl I suppose. But thanks so much haha

The sad part is the only part I laughed at was the "subscribe" bit.
T'was alright overall, I guess.

XxFalopioxX responds:

Thanks and one of my friends thinks that the funny part was de SUBCRIBE thing. jaja i have a litttle imagination i guess. i will be improving i know it look really clunky and sketchy . lol.

At times like this you'd hope NG would have a loop button.

Fantishow responds:

It doesn't need one. Keep watching.

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