Aprime's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[4 Slaps or 1]

omg 3D movie maker, what version of windows are you running this on?

wermusam responds:

Hi Aprime, I've used 3D Movie Maker on Windows 95, 98, ME, XP, and Windows 7. I used Camtasia Studios to screen capture the video from 3D Movie Maker to a video format where it can be uploaded online or converted into a DVD. I don't know about newer versions of Windows but I noticed frames would run a little faster with newer versions of Windows and could handle more content in a scene without the frame rate slowing down.

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #9 - Bad Guys]

Wow, this is really well done. I wish there was more content like this!

[Butterfingering]

Daaaaaaaamn, that was awesome!

[Dreading Water]

They should use this animation in schools as an intro for swimming lessons :)
The animation was awesome, great job!
Not sure why at 3:00 you decided to draw black lines to end the body, when you already had lines from the item in front. Quite distracting and odd considering you didn't do it at 2:33
Just petty stuff from me really, again - great job!

AgentDajo responds:

I had to draw the lines in, because the dock was not on it's own separate layer. in order to compensate, I had to draw black lines to easily paint-bucket color their bodies.

[Strawberry Clock Rides the Train]

Oh my goodness, didn't expect that ending! F*ck

[BARTPOCALYPSE]

Wow

[Cal in Cartoon - Episode Seven]

It's good. Some nice little jokes here and there.

My only suggestion is that right now it seems a part like part 7 instead of episode 7.
The difference being, this feels like a movie split into several parts, instead of an episode you might find in a series.
Don't change it, it's good they all link together. But maybe allow the script to imply what as happened before. Not so much in a sense that it's annoying for those who had watched the previous episodes.

Not the easiest things to do, but just something to bear in mind and you'll do it better each time :P

calmulligan responds:

Thanks heaps for the critique! I appreciate the time you took to give me your thoughts and criticism, and will certainly take this all into account as the series develops.
I can promise you, as I'm now working on episode 17, episodes 11 through to 20 are almost an entirely different show; better executed and has more of an identity and quality to it. I hope you continue watching as it evolves :)

[shapes club- poorly drawn lines]

I like triangles #notpartoftheilluminati

[Ghost in the Shell - App Store]

This is amazing!! I haven't even seen the actual film and this is great!

[Jungle Chaser]

That's some of the nicest tween animation I've seen.
My only advice is to animate according to the sound effect than add a sound effect to the animation. But hey, perhaps that's what you done.
Regardless, again - nice animation. Interesting to watch.

ponderous-plants responds:

Thanks for the advice, trying to getting sounds to match up was pretty tough.