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Well that was disappointing.. In my opinion waterlollies was the best one...
Your animation has become worse.. that was no way near a good as the rest..
Not only are you not trying as hard with the animation.. but also with the story line.. For some reason.. you have made this a "to be continued" when it wasn't even that long.. Your other work is much longer.. and they weren't to be continued.. But this maybe down to the file size..
I thought the narrator at the beginning was pretty cool.. although at times.. well mostly at the beginning she was drowned out by the music..
For the story itself.. it seemed as if you were running out of ideas.. and decided to put in a narrator.. Its like.. Your other work didn't have a narrator but it was still good.. This.. if it didn't have a narrator.. it would be much worse..
And since its a to be continued.. I suggest you carry on using the narrator..
But take away the narrator when you decide to make another one without a "To be continued" as the narrators aren't really doing you any good...
Basically.. the storyline, animation and length of video use to be much better than it is now.. Perhaps you don't really care about that since you may be getting paid and still get paid no matter how much you don't try..
But if you aren't getting paid.. it seems as though your not trying as hard as you use to.. perhaps your love for flash has deteriorated and you can't be arsed to spend time animating decently..

Ofcourse the animation was good.. but when you look back at your old work.. which I suggest you do.. you really notice the different..
Perhaps look back at your old work without any sound and compare it to your new work with sound.. this may help you make a better flash next time you come to make a video about bitey again..
Because seriously.. they're getting worse..

Anywho.. carry on animating.. which I'm sure you will

This Five is not entirely for the flash but more to do with how much potential you have.. and how you did not use it to the best of your ability.. which you have done previously.

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Score: 5

"Meh"

submission: Pinball Maze

date: November 29, 2009

Wasn't hard at all.. I don't know what everyone is complaining about..
I didn't die once.. I got 1880.053 on my first go
Fuck knows if that is good or not..

Ermm.. Just make it longer.. I have a slight suspicion you stole this from a website like flashkit or something.. and then changed it about a bit.. and claimed it as your own..
But thats not why I've given the "low" score..
The low score is due to you not having enough levels.. and there being no music..

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Score: 6

"I hardly make review but..."

submission: Pencilmation #10

date: November 8, 2009

Wow.. thats not your best work
Ofcourse I would have given a higher score.. like a nine
But knowing your work.. I really expected more from you..
Its better than Pencilmation #9 I have to admit
But seriously.. you seem to be losing your touch..

The simple ones are much better.. they're more random and entertaining
You never know what is going to happen

This was really just predictable..

Also.. You seem to have taken away the hand.. I thought it was a new feature.. Are you just getting lazier?
You now use the page turner to travel forward in time.. Don't do that..

The whole point of this originally.. was the fact that you were drawing something on the page and it would come alive..

This one is just like your creating a normal story.. and then adding a pencil init.. as an excuse so you can name it Pencilmation hence adding more to the series...