They should use this animation in schools as an intro for swimming lessons :)
The animation was awesome, great job!
Not sure why at 3:00 you decided to draw black lines to end the body, when you already had lines from the item in front. Quite distracting and odd considering you didn't do it at 2:33
Just petty stuff from me really, again - great job!
I had to draw the lines in, because the dock was not on it's own separate layer. in order to compensate, I had to draw black lines to easily paint-bucket color their bodies.
Pretty sure you can't trade dogs. So that explains that. Good memories.
Oh my goodness, didn't expect that ending! F*ck
It's good. Some nice little jokes here and there.
My only suggestion is that right now it seems a part like part 7 instead of episode 7.
The difference being, this feels like a movie split into several parts, instead of an episode you might find in a series.
Don't change it, it's good they all link together. But maybe allow the script to imply what as happened before. Not so much in a sense that it's annoying for those who had watched the previous episodes.
Not the easiest things to do, but just something to bear in mind and you'll do it better each time :P
Thanks heaps for the critique! I appreciate the time you took to give me your thoughts and criticism, and will certainly take this all into account as the series develops.
I can promise you, as I'm now working on episode 17, episodes 11 through to 20 are almost an entirely different show; better executed and has more of an identity and quality to it. I hope you continue watching as it evolves :)
I like triangles #notpartoftheilluminati
Nice, how long did it take?
3 week with spend 10/14hours per days
This is amazing!! I haven't even seen the actual film and this is great!
That's some of the nicest tween animation I've seen.
My only advice is to animate according to the sound effect than add a sound effect to the animation. But hey, perhaps that's what you done.
Regardless, again - nice animation. Interesting to watch.
Thanks for the advice, trying to getting sounds to match up was pretty tough.
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